Tuesday, November 30, 2010

Red's CD Project Story 2: Part 38 – The Unforgiven (section 2)

Note: Sorry again for taking so long between parts. Just been super busy. I think all three of these sections will come across better when they are all together. At least I hope so.

“He could just be gone”

Nestor rolled, glanced back to see the trail of blood running down the stonewall leading to Oan’s still body. Two shafts dug deep into the boy, one in his shoulder, the other his stomach. Mortal wounds, no doubt, even for a boy with his talents in healing. One last arrow was split through his palm.

Around Nestor heavy steps crunched in the deep snow and long shadows fell about him, as the old man clung to his spear.

He risked one more look at the boy and, for the first time in a very long time, he thought of his own son, who was almost certianly dead. For had Nestor not seen the Dinar run him out into the Sorna? Something in him was not entirely sure. His son was just another sacrifice, for what now appeared to be a fool’s hope. Immortality was not for him.

“Ah, my boy.” Nestor mumbled, hoping he had changed enough to make some of their attackers pay. For long life was not the only perk of his cursed bargain.

He focused inward, feeling something cold, almost slimy, slither through his veins. Every sense heightened, if they had not, he would never have noticed the boy’s eyes flicker. He saw it just in time before changing completely.

Stopping the change, he rose to his knees to meet the attackers.

“Ah, my boy,” he whispered, and now a frozen bit of intuition fell through him. Somewhere, his son barely clung to life, but with a rage that roared like a fire. “Forgive me, my son.”

* * *

“How can I be lost, if I’ve got nowhere to go?”

The voices overwhelmed him, pounding like a hammer against the inside of Eden’s skull. He came to think of them as the voices of the damned. For all of them were in this together.

There was Cortrobrane: “Out into the country, to a farm, I believe your father’s ranch, I followed her…”

Kendra: “If I give you my heart, my lord. Will you accept it and keep it safe.”

A thought crept in – they were both masked and shaved clean. His mother had said to make sure Ewam looked like a prince. The thought was swept away.

Cortobrane again: “They stood on the porch and spoke words of lovers.”

His mother: “It’s true all of it. My own brother told me so. She was with him. He was in her.”

The sword Fangen: “Make the blood flow. Spill the blood. Make the blood flow. Spill the blood. Make the blood flow…”

His father: “Find your heart my son, find it while you still can. Use the sword if you must, but only…”

His brother (in their twin language): “Do you really love her?”

His own: “She’s a lovely girl. One suiting a prince…”

The sword: “Make the blood flow. Spill the blood. Make the blood flow. Spill the blood. Make the blood flow…”

Cortobrane: “They kissed. Not like a brother kisses his brother’s future wife.”

His mother: “He was in her days before your wedding. He defiled her and then she was pregnant…”

Cortobrane: “They went inside…”

His mother: “He went inside…”

“I HAVE HEARD ENOUGH!” Eden screamed, holding Fangen up high. Silence rang in his head before one voice dominated his head.

“Make the blood flow. Spill the blood. Make the blood flow. Spill the blood. Make the blood flow…”

* * *

“How come it’s got so cold?”

Banik disappeared among the Children, and while Ewam did not have time to follow his descent Ewam was sure the man was going to receive enough aid to stay alive. Ewam knew that Duna provided him such confidence. The sword did not believe in or perhaps did not understand the term defeat.

The path between him and the Dinar was cleared as the battled rage on around. The two creatures dismounted from their hellish beasts in perfect synchronicity. Drawing their black swords, their voice from mouths formed in endless grins boomed in his head.

“Die, half-King,” Het said.

“Die, betrayer,” Lars said.

The name betrayer struck a blow at him. Where had he been called that before? He did not have time to contemplate it before the twin Dinar lifted their swords and their dead black eyes burned hot red. All the warmth in the air drained, an unusal chill took its place.

“Die,” The voices said in unison.

A groan came from the ground, and his footing became unsteady. Before he could muster an attack, something grabbed hold his foot. It was a hand, stripped clean of skin and flesh protruding from the earth. Another sprang forth, grabbing his other ankle. The bone fingers shredded his pants and tore into his flesh. More hands began to appear and then mouths from long-buried skulls. All of them clutched and pulled and before Ewam cut through some, but the ones that fell were quickly replaced by two more. His feet were actually sinking into the ground. He looked up to see that the Dinar had moved almost within reach of his swords.

“Meet the dead, betrayer,” Het said.

“Die.” Lars coldly reiterated.

* * *

“And how can I blame you when it’s me I can’t forgive?”

Another few moments surely, Kendra thought biting her lower lip to forget the throbbing pain eating away at her body. At least she did not feel her broken ankles any longer. Delirium and shock had numbed both her ankles and feet. She supposed, in time and treament, both would heal reasonably well, but she would never walk the same. Eden had broke them days before, Kendra was not sure how long, time moved differently for her now. He had tied her mouth shut to muffle her screams, not that any one would have come to her aid.

It was almost over now, she told herself again. With every slight step, she fidgeted thinking that it would be Eden. She knew that his next visit would be his last, and she expected that to happen soon.

She clutched the dagger to her chest, embracing its cold touch.

“You could end you know, before he comes.” It was Ewam’s voice in her head. Looking up, she saw him standing there. He was haggard, tired, just as he had been that night at Thunder Sted, and undeniably alive. His beard was still thin stubble after having shaved for the Reap Ball. His red hair was starting to curl again on the back of his neck.

“You could and not have to face it,” Ewam reached for her hand. “Please, I beg it.”

“I cannot,” Kendra answered, embracing the illusion and hiding the dagger once again under her blanket. “It is my penalty to face.”

“It is my fault,” Ewam said. “I shall take his penalty. Blame me. Say that I forced you, that you had no choice. He may show mercy.”

“No, it was I that sought you out,” Kendra grabbed the apparition’s hand. “In my heart, I knew what I was doing even if my mind did not. I betrayed him, not you. It is I that shall bear the penalty.”

“I cannot bear of you,” Ewam cried. “I cannot.”

“Hush, my love,” she cried along. “Hush, Ewam Perde, son of Rudan, King of Satar, Dawn of Man.”

He smiled and tears changed course in the new lines formed on his face.

“I love you,” he said, kissing her hand then her mouth.

“I love you, and the shame of hiding it has worn on me more than any other hurt delivered or any call from a cursed demon. It is time for my heart to be free of this guilt. I shall ask for forgiveness, first here then when I meet the light.”

“Will you wait for me?”

“I’ll be standing on the porch, waiting my dear and that night shall last a thousand years,” she smiled, closed her eyes and when they opened he was gone.

The door to her chamber opened, Eden, clutching a strange sword, walked in. Following behind him was a fat mat that smelled like swine.

“My husband,” she said in a warm voice. She had called him so their first night of marriage and meant it. Briefly, they had been truly happy. His face softened slightly, but then hardened and angered.

“Kendra Leone Perde, I, King Eden Perde of Isa, am here to pass judgement.”

Friday, November 12, 2010

Red's CD Project Story 2: Part 37 – The Unforgiven (section 1)

Note: So I decided to break this song up into three installments. I thought it was appropriate considering the song. Also, it'd keep from this post from getting way too long. I have had a hard time finding time to sit down and write lately. I think breaking this up also will make it feel less daunting and take some pressure off me. Don't miss the Dark Tower installment below. Hey where's the movie list updates? Gone the way of the 1,000 greatest albums, perhaps.


Disc 2
Track 16: The Unforgiven III by Metallica

“How could he know this new dawn’s light would change his life forever”

Sensing a shift in the attack, the Children converged on Ewam and the sword. Even those soulless, bloodthirsty beings could feel the rhythm, hear the hum the blade made as it sliced through the air. Like a magnet it drew them, or perhaps they drew it. The heat coming through the pommel increased with each kill.

At some point, Ewam faintly became aware that he no longer controlled his arms, his legs and his heart. The sword was driving his actions, driving his thoughts from his brain. With each new enemy to arise before him, Duna twitched to life, cutting them down with ease. When a troup of twenty or more came at once, Duna burned in his hand. He gave one great stroke that brought with it a great wave of hot white sand. Each grain burned through the Children, who shrieked with pain, before being buried under a fresh, smoking dune.

Then Ewam was before the circle with Banik cleaving his way through the backtrail. The circle, knowing the real danger was before their two black-robed masters, formed a single line before Ewam. All along the field of battle the moans, the shrieks, the howls and the cheers came to a halt.

For all the rest was ancillary to those two black-robed Dinar, the row of Children before them and that one man with his magic sword.

***

“Set sail to sea, but pulled off course, by the light of golden treasure”

Kendra Leone, for at that point she was still a few days away from becoming Kendra Perde, had left Omet secretly that fateful night all those years ago, and she was provided steed by a man named Hector Cortobrane, brother to the Queen, mother of Ewam and Eden and father to Randall, future mayor of Stra. No one trusted Hector any more than they had to, but he was a sly man, who could provide things such as a horse to a lady looking to run from the city without notice. She knew no one else to whom she could turn.

Kendra navigated her way to Thunder Sted to apologize to the man she loved and say farewell. Be it that she was young and naïve to believe such things are done so easily and finally, but her word was given to another. Ewam had to respect that. Never once did it cross her mind that the chord between them could not so easily be cut. Her heart was in this and so was his.

Under the moon at Thunder Sted, Ewam came stumbling from the field, soiled and dirty. Under his buttoned shirt, his chest heaved from a great heart. A heart, she knew then, she could no longer resist. She floated across the porch in her blue riding dress as a cloud swept across the moonlight. They hesitated before embracing, saying words neither would remember as a drizzle touched the parched earth. If not for that cloud, a careless shadow from an already fattening young man ordered to follow some girl by his father would have crept out from where he hid along the path, probably alerting the two soon-to-be lovers of the intruder in their mist. He was a dumb boy spiraling toward being a dumb, yet sly man like his father. He did not understand who or what he saw other than two nobles preparing to bump middles.

Randall knew his father dealt in such secrets to gain power. He assumed these two were no more than pawns for Hector Cortbrane to play. Years later, the memory hit the fat man as he stood before Eden in Union Hall. He could not stifle a laugh. That how the woman had known so much. She had viewed it through him using some sort of magic. She had pieced together that the two brothers were, at least secretly, at odds. It was their one true weakness and now it was up to him to exploit it to ultimately get rid of both of them. How could he have ever known that night would mean so much?

“My Lord, I can prove their transgression. Only now did I realize it?”

Eden’s ears perked as he fondled the sword. The thing already appeared to have a hold on him.

“I will hear this, then set myself to delivering the penalty.”

* * *

“Been afraid. Always afraid. Of the things he’s feeling.”

The line opened in the middle allowing the two Dinar to come forward. From them came a putrid smell that soaked through the smell of death that covered the field. When they were before him, both pulled back their hoods to reveal identical decaying, green faces with black teeth that grinned out permanently from the loss of their lips. When they spoke, it was with an echo, as if their voices originated from the underworld and then sounded out from hollow mouths.

“I am Lars Met-Lan Ica, Dinar of the orignal blood,” the one to Ewam’s left said.

“I am Het Met-Lan Ica, twin brother of Lars, Dinar of the original blood,” the one to the right said.

For a moment, Ewam was stunned to find his foes to be twins. It was coincidence, but one that unsettled his nerves. He thought of Eden. He wondered if his brother was overcoming the ache that touched his heart and mind. Ewam needed his brother to be strong.

“I am King Ewam of Satar,” He regained his composure. “You have committed crimes against the people of Stra that are not forgiveable. I am here to deliver your penalty.”

A forced laugh came from the two.

“Are there not two Kings of Satar?” Lars said.

“Perhaps being brothers, twins, is not the same for those in the light,” Het said.

“We have been loyal for an age,” Lars said.

“Beyond death and the great change,” Het answered.

“I would not trust a man that touches one of those swords,” Lars answered.

“I believe one may have already lost trust in the other,” Het said.

Banik arrived at Ewam’s elbow, bringing his mouth to Ewam’s ear.

“Close off your mind and heart, it’s a window for them to see you and the one’s you love.”

“A member of the failed, Sorna Watch,” Het said, seeing Banik.

“Not just any member, at that,” Lars said.

“Your father licked the blood of your baby when he spilt it in the sand,” Het’s mouth opened wide.

“Then laughed as he burned the babe’s flesh,” Lars continued.

“NO!!!” Banik raised his sword, and charged at the two. He disappeared as the Children converged on him.

Wednesday, November 3, 2010

The Dark Tower VI: May 17, 2013

Note: I finished the sixth book the series quite awhile ago, and am very close to finishing the last book. The CD Project has ate up most of my free writing time the last month or two, and to be frank, I haven't been real wild about anything I've been writing. But here we go.

SONG OF SUSANNAH

I'm not going spend much time talking about this book. I kind of feel like this is more of a long prologue for the final book. Song of Susannah is broken up into Stanzas instead of chapters. Each Stanza concludes with a verse from a the song. Like this one below that concludes the book . ...

STAVE: Commala-come-kass!
The child has come at last!
Sing your song, O' sing it well,
The child has come to pass.

RESPONSE: Commala-come-kass!
The worst has come to pass.
The Tower trembles on its ground;
The child has come at last.

Basically, the importance of this book is Susannah/Mia traveling to New York to a place called the Dixie Pig to birth the child that is a mixture of Susannah, Mia (a demon) and Roland (the gunslinger). How this happened is very confusing and I am not going to attempt to describe it. Anyways, you find out quite a bit more about the plans of the Crimson King (the ultimate bad guy) and his many minions. Stephen King (the character) also makes his first appearance.

Most of all, this book is about the birth of Mordred (a name that should be familiar to anyone that knows anything about Arthurian Legend). He's a little bastard that tracks our heroes for the rest of the series.

Anyways, you may wonder why I have titled this section May 17, 2013. Well according to the official website of "The Dark Tower" that is when the first movie of the series is set to be released. Obviously, these things are always tentative.

Here's the jist of the endeavor. Ron Howard is set to direct for Universal Studios. The plan is to make three movies with a full season of television episodes to bridge the gap between each film. I think the shows will air on NBC. No actors have been announced yet, but I am sort of hoping they scale back on simply signing A-list people, at least for the main characters.

I see this as either being very successful or completely dreadful. If the first movie bombs at the box office will NBC really want to be committed two seasons of shows to build up for bad movies. If they do drop it, will the entire series flounder after one bad showing. This is possible, because the action early in the series is a little slow compared to later.

You can find out more about this whole situation by Googling "The Dark Tower." I just think this is the most relevant thing about the series to share right now.