Placed
around the peak of Kekur were six stone slabs twice the height of Cassar. Between
the stones was a flat marble platform where one would have expected a jagged,
pointed top. The same craftsman who had built the stairway likely had arranged
the stones and laid the marble at the peak of Kekur. To his knowledge, only
Tarek Grandar and he had been to the peak and seen this wonder. Standing at the
center was another small wonder, one that Cassar had not expected despite his
wealth of knowledge and understanding of history. The small wonder was a tiny
being, only slightly taller than most dwarves, but frail and wispy.
The
being lived out of frame, as Cassar’s father would say. For instance, Cassar
knew the stairway to the peak, the stones, the marble top, were all relics
leftover from at least a hundred lifetimes past, perhaps a thousand. For the
being dwelling between the stones, shirtless and with his bony, hairy arms
crossed behind his back, that time was like a blink in a day.
He
was known as The Dreamer, and any other truths about the being, Cassar’s father
had once said, could only be found at the edge of dreams and center of
nightmares. Cassar was living a nightmare of late, and perhaps only now truly
understood what his father meant.
Tarek
Grandar did not hesitate upon seeing The Dreamer. Why should he, Cassar
thought? Tarek likely knew he’d be there the entire time. Cassar followed close
enough to hear. Smyth was at it his elbow.
“I
dream of agony rolling on the lips of the sea like thunder on the wind,” The
Dreamer spoke, his voice hollow, as if it started somewhere in a deep cavern of
the mountain. “Paw and claw and hand.”
The
Dreamer crooked his head, which was covered with frazzled gray hair, so that
the clear white pupils of his eyes could peer up into Tarek’s face. Of course, he was not really studying
Tarek, for Cassar knew that The Dreamer was blind. His sight was another
casualty in the forging of the sword Lunar. Yet, the being’s mind still saw
things, what exactly, no one was sure.
“Your
dreams are poison sweetened by sugar, but poison, still the same,” Tarek spat.
“He
who never dreams lives a nightmare,” The Dreamer shrugged his shoulders and
held his arms out with his palms up.
“I
never dream because I never rest,” Tarek screamed. “I stand at the doorway to
the heavens and can not open it, can never enter. You’ve made sure of that.”
“Nor
shall you rest, at least not here, not now,” The Dreamer rebuked. “Now is the time
to square the debt and move on.”
Tarek’s
shoulders slumped, and Cassar heard the king weeping. The Dreamer’s placid
expression never changed as he moved past the king to address those behind.
“The
world was broke, so the heavens mended it,” The Dreamer said. “It gave forth a
man born of the elements of life. They scarred a favorite son in the sky to
provide a weapon to throw down the dark. In return, the heavens asked that you
stay on bended knee.”
Cassar
spun to see the terror enter Smyth’s eyes.
“That
bond is broke.” The mountain below their feet moaned at the statement. Behind The
Dreamer, Tarek drew the sword of Marek, named Kekur for the great peak whose
shadow the kingdom dwelt. Tarek lifted the sword and drove it into the marble
platform. The mountain moaned louder, before it cracked.
The
crack started small from where the sword pierced. Across the air came the sound
of shattering stone and rock. Farther below, trees fell and, where the mountain
met valley, the earth split. The rift spread south taking with it the bulk of
the kingdom of Besa, which fell in the ever-widening sore. They could not see
all this from the peak, but felt it in their minds. Cassar was sure that The
Dreamer planted the vision.
“Oathbreakers
be damned!” The Dreamer and Tarek roared as the king drew his other sword,
Lunar. A high-pitched siren accompanied the sword as it left its sheath. A
blinding white light burst forth.
When
his vision returned, Cassar met Smyth’s witless gaze. The only emotion left in
his cousin’s face was terror. Smyth and his allies began to squeal like
frightened pigs then turned and started to run down the stairway at a breakneck
pace. Many, he thought, would do
just that. It would take only one misstep and they’d tumble thousands of feet
in seconds. Tears stung at Cassar’s eyes. Smyth had been a prodigy, a brilliant
speaker, and despite his poor choice to betray Tarek Grandar and Marek, a
beautiful being. If Smyth survived the descent, he be no more than a dimwit
savage stumbling around in the shadows, his only thoughts being the memory of
his former gifts and his one poor choice.
“I
hope he meets a quick end,” Cassar whispered before turning back to The
Dreamer, Tarek Grandar, and the sword. Both beings eyed him, curiously.
“Do
you still bend your knee, mighty Cassar,” Tarek asked? The Dreamer watched.
“You’ve
divided our world,” Cassar said. A frown crossed Tarek’s face at the words.
“Not
only our world,” Tarek said, and, for the first time, a look of worry crossed The
Dreamer’s face. Tarek cut into the sky above his head with Lunar, a single,
sharp beam of light went up. A clean, clear wound tore the fabric of the deep
blue sky.
“What
have you done,” The Dreamer asked?
“I’ve
fulfilled your dream,” Tarek said. “If I am denied the heavens, denied the
light, yet entrusted to guard them both, then I shall not have them forget that
debt.”
From
the wound flowed a stream of water that fell into the crack created in the
mountain by Kekur. It gushed down forming a great river, a river known from
hence forth as Belnor. Cassar could hear voices in the water, screaming out
names and prayers. Those voices echoed in his head the rest of his days.
The
Dreamer studied the forming river as Tarek laid Lunar on the marble platform.
He then pulled Kekur from the mountain, and placed it next to the other sword.
A burden seemed lifted off his shoulders, and a smile crossed his face, and not
a lunatic’s smile, but a genuine smile full of cheer and good will.
“My
days dwelling here are past,” Tarek said, as much to Cassar as The Dreamer. “I
shall visit the witch and her door and move on to another world.”
The
Dreamer’s eyes dropped to the two swords near his feet with a troubled look
furrowing his brow.
Tarek
approached Cassar, and put his hand on the gargola’s shoulder.
“Your
heart betrayed me,” Tarek said. “I am sorry for this. It is as much my fault as
yours.”
“I’ve
followed you everywhere,” Cassar pleaded.
“But you did not bend your knee
when I asked,” Tarek said. “You broke the bond just as your other brethren. You
failed your king. I am sorry friend.”
“What’s to become of me and mine?”
Cassar stepped back. “Are we doomed to the fate of the traitors then? Shall I
stalk around stupidly for eternity?"
“No, that is for the Shadows of
Marek,” Tarek said. “They will live in the forest of the foothills, and their
incessant wails will be a reminder to all. You and yours have a different
fate. You are the Keepers of
Marek. You shall live quietly outside of the palace and wait and watch for the
return.”
“You’ll return then?”
“No, another man will rise and
carry those swords. You shall wait for him and serve him no matter the task.
That is your curse."
With that, Tarek left, passing
those that had escorted him to the peak. He walked out of their life, visiting
the witch in her cave and the mysterious door that only a select few dared to
open. Tarek opened that door and never returned.
Cassar dropped to his knees and
wept for a very long time. The other members of his party joined him. Night approached when they finally
rose. When they did, The Dreamer was gone. So were the swords. They descended
the mountain, arriving home late the next day.
Cassar and the other Keepers of
Marek lived quietly, solemnly outside of Metahischoo for an age until a boy was
born of a woman and the wind.
But, that is a dream for another
day.
3 comments:
I think the story is good. Your context gets a little messed up in the last 3 paragraphs or so. The story seems to be told from the point of Cassar the whole way then suddenly the voice changes as Tarek leaves and walks through the door. Cassar couldn't possibly have witnessed this and probably shouldn't know what Tarek was talking about to the dreamer. The whole time I thought Cassar and Tarek were alone at the peak area with Smyth behind him, then suddenly Cassar is there weeping with the entire group. There should be like a landing below the peak area where the parties gathered since it seemed in the beginning that only the three men made it to the peak area with the stones. I might not even make mention of the boy. Just say they toiled outside of Metahischoo as they waited for as long as it took for the one Tarek spoke of to arrive and fulfill their debt. Those would be my suggestions to maybe juice up the ending you were worried about.
You bring up good points. The things you highlight have always bothered me and certainly could be left out. I think I add just as tie in to the other bigger story. I've had a little fun building these characters. I decided to write this just because the Belnor played such a big part of the last story, and the forming of the river is hinted to so often. I thought, I need to write this story just so that I know for sure what happened. We also see Tarek Grandar for the first time, and I am not particulary fond of him here. Cassar keeps emerging as a character that I love. He sort of got tossed in near the end of the CD project, since then his little story has evolved in my mind. I've wrote just a little start of thing about him before he meets Grandar. That would be another big project that I am not ready for.
Next I am going to start posting my New CD Project. I may not get you CD for awhile, but I thought I might post links to songs.
I think you got caught in the prequel trap. This may fit into a story that Cassar would tell people in the original CD story, then you dont have to try to connect the story to your other one.
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