Note: I am planning on entering an online competition where you are provided a genre, location and object that all must appear in a story that is a 1,000 words or less. I'll have 48 hours to write the story. Below is a practice one from an example: Sci Fi, Drug Rehab Center, Wig, that I wrote. Hope you enjoy. I'll try an post my entries once the competition begins.
Down the corridor her steps kept time for
those lost in it. Edna paced in rhythm and habit past closed doors with
patients sleeping off their last fix of Lysandrium. She wore heels and stepped
with force off the tiles, knowing in the waning hours of slumber, her time
would count the patients into a new reality. Dr. Puck developed the process
over years of trial and error for those addicted to the sleeping potion used
for crew members for deep space travel missions.
Considering the numbers, the trafficking of
humans beyond the stars seemed not worth the human toll. If Dr. Puck’s theories
were true, then thirty percent of crew members experienced mild to severe
addiction to the narcotics that keep the body young and mind in limbo during
voyages hundreds of light years away. That’s the theory he offered for
publication. In their long, private discussions, he insists the number is
likely much higher.
“Don’t forget, so many go and don’t return.
The politicians blame all those on malfunctions with equipment, unforeseen
asteroid fields and contact with hostile beings, but that’s not always the
case. I think some crews have nearly one hundred percent mental breakdown.
Complete catastrophe.”
Dr. Puck’s passion enthralled Edna. Working
with him tingled the very nerves that had pushed her toward becoming a nurse.
And, Dr. Puck, he was so…. She nearly stopped pacing, but caught herself. Only
a few minutes away from reanimation, and she nearly blew it. If only he’d let
his guard down about mating with colleagues. Other nerves tingled with that
thought.
“It’s getting near time for you to return
to teaching. We need to get you well.”
“Teaching? I’m no damn teacher.”
***
“Please, I just want to sleep. Don’t you
understand?” The Lysandrium-rich mind longed for sleep, but couldn’t without a
fix.
“Mr. Roberts, you’ve slept so long already.
It’s time to wake and to live.”
This man was grossly overweight, and his
stomach slipped out from under the cotton white t-shirt issued to all the
patients. He sat in a white recliner, the walls were white, and he wept.
“Why do you keep calling me that name? I
know that’s not who I am.”
“What is your name then, Mr. Roberts?”
He wept.
“I don’t remember. Please, can I just sleep
some more?”
“God, what don’t you understand, you dumb beast! I need to know what time it is.”
Edna closed the door, resolving to confess her love for the doctor after her shift.
***
Edna sat quietly next to Dr. Puck in the
community room. It was her first time near him since he rebuked her affections
a month earlier. Fifteen of the patients from the previous cycle had progressed
to actualization sessions.
“I’m scared to ask it.” The patient seated across the table from them said.
“Was I a man when I came here?”
"I just remember being a man, that’s all.”
***
It wasn’t a date. Dr. Puck had made that
much clear. The two sat alone in the cafeteria, eating the mush served to
everyone in the facility.
Edna slurped the mush into her mouth. How
had she ever loved this man?
“Do you even care for them?”
“Edna, they are my life’s work.”
“Did you ever care for me?”
He swirled the mush around his plate, before
tipping it and letting it slide onto his tray. Taking his napkin, he wiped the
plate clean until it shined. Before she could react, he reached across the
table and pulled her hair.
He tugged once and hard, and she yelped as it tore away from her scalp. Stunned, she glared at him holding what she clearly could see now was a blond wig in one hand and the plate toward her in the other.
"Care for you, Edna? How could I not? You’re my greatest success.”
Dropping the wig and the plate in front of her, he left Edna staring at a face in the plate.
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