Thursday, May 6, 2010

Red's CD Project Story 2: Part 22 – Power

Note: I expected to stay with the witch and Oan here, but the song steered me toward another direction. I think it turned into a good way to start the new disc.

Disc 2
Track 1: Broken, Beat & Scarred – Metallica

“They scratch me. They scrape me. They cut and rape me”

His name used to be Eglan Nas Ver Wetching, an Atlan noble of some wealth and power in the days before the splitting of the world by Tarek Grandar. He led armies across the vast sea in the east to conquer lands now lost even in legends. Never a handsome man, he grew strangely fond of his two younger sisters when he hit the age when boys started to notice girls. For years, he made veiled advancements toward the two girls. When they reached an age of consent, they both outright denied his intentions which drove him slowly mad.

He turned to battle, to war, to brutality, to things polite folks could not imagine. His armies butchered entire villages against the wishes of his King. Eventually, he was banished with penalty of death if he ever returned to Atlan. That was when he found the Dinar, or the Dinar found him. Hatala could not quite puzzle out how that had come about.

The Dinar called him Neros, which in the old tongue meant casket. The name came from the two wooden stakes that he carried on his belt loop. They came from the caskets his two sisters had been buried in when he was finished with them. A ghastly business there that even Hatala did not probe deeply into uncovering.

While he had never been a vision of beauty for any woman, he had not improved in appearance in his considerable age. As with all the ancient Dinar, which there were not many, his skin was light green and lined with thin purple veins. His eyes were nearly empty of emotion, his nose was all but gone, and dark blisters spotted his body. The dark powers of the underworld could maintain flesh for only so long. Soon, Neros would dissipate into spirit and return to the fires of the underworld. But his strength was not all gone. Contrary to his physical body, his spirit’s strength grew in power and vitality. That was how the ancient Dinar maintained control over the younger, more able-bodied recruits to the Dinar brotherhood. It was also what made him and his companions useful to her.

Taking them into her bed had started as a necessity as they traveled from Noce to Stra. Even though she was strong, Salama’s pull still called her back. The only way to quench that thirst was to engage in the acts. She had not lied to her father, the Dinar were brutal with her in bed. The brothers, Lars and Het, used her together, forcing her into acts no good woman would ever admit to. She had loved indicating such to her father, who would have betrayed her in a second to the lusty folk of Stra that wanted her dead from the time she was a little girl and they noticed she was different. The look on his face left a sweet taste on her tongue. She was different now more than ever, but no self-righteous people were going to bring her down. That was going to be quite the opposite really. The folks of Stra were in for quite a shock and those that did not bow down to her would be fed to the Children of Salama.

Neros drooled down at her naked and used body from the doorway to her father’s room. He was the ranking officer in the little band that Salama had sent with her to complete his wishes in Stra and beyond.

The sworn pupil of the Lord of the Underworld disrobed. Tufts of hair fell from his head with the black robe to the floor. Like many of the others, his lips were eroded away leaving his gray and black teeth grinning out at all times. She could smell decay emanating off him from across the room. The odor always hit like a punch in the stomach forcing vomit up into her throat.

“Please, be gentle,” she whimpered. He soaked in her meekness.

He was the roughest with her. He bit and cut, much like the others, but he scratched deep into her flesh, pouring out blood and tightened his cold, stiff hands around her throat till she was nearly unconscious. Her screams aroused him so she used all her strength to deny him that pleasure as long as possible.

When he grabbed the wooden stakes, the ones that had rotted, slivered and softened in the age since he first grabbed them from his sisters’ gravesite, there was no stopping the torrent of agony. He used them unmercifully on her, gouging and tearing away at her insides.

For her part, the pain was terrible but it also provided the lengthiest pleasure that any of the Dinar had been able to produce. Old flesh was indeed weak.

Neros, like Lars, Het and the fourth, a mute named Mahmet, who came a long time ago from beyond the Sorna, all believed she was their minion. Nothing more than a toy to be controlled, used and abused. So they believed and so she allowed them.

Power and authority were not always wrestled with the sword and the shield. While brute force was good for men, women had to use other means to gain their end. She had known from the moment she felt the sudden urge to run west toward Noce that she could not succumb totally to that desire. For her to maintain her own destiny, she had to be attentive, to watch, to listen and understand the weaknesses of those she was dealing with.

“You are not focused,” Neros voice sounded as if he had swallowed a handful of dirt. From his breath, it smelled like he ate a handful of another substance left on the ground.

“I fear the neighbors,” she lied. “They spy, they always have. We cannot have them aware just yet.”

He grunted. He may have been countless years old, but he still reacted to a woman’s worries the same as any other man with a grunt and a roll of the eyes.

“They saw nothing,” he bit into the flesh of her neck.

“We cannot be sure this way,” she held back a surprised yip from the pain. “The folk cannot know of us just yet.”

He pinned her shoulders down and stared with dead pupils down at her. Even so, she could sense his desire, his need.

“I will send Het and Lars with the children,” Neros sat back on his knees. “They will handle the neighbors.”

She was sure to sigh loudly and turned her face away. He could not see her wince that way, he loved to see his work strain out in the lines of her face and in tears that not even she could hold in.

“You know they will bungle it,” she sighed again and started to close her legs.

“Woman,” it came out almost as a plea. She could tell the tone even surprised him.

“I cannot provide you the proper attention with this weighing on my mind,” she turned back letting the full effect of her large green eyes to take effect. He dropped a hard fist down onto the mattress before standing up.

“You tease me,” he growled. “Be here when I return or I promise to make you feel ever inch of these neighbors pain.”

“Yes Lord Neros,” she sat up on her knees and bowed. He stalked out of the room, letting out a low whistle that called the other Dinar to him.

Hatala rolled around in the covers of the bed. When the door below closed, she laughed using her power to heal any wounds they had caused. It would not be long, she thought, until they were completely hers. It would all be hers, including him. The one they sought. The one who Salama truly feared.

She rubbed her stomach and cooed thinking about it. Before all was said and done, Hatala Del Aram would be second only to the Lord of the Underworld. Her offspring, well, that blessed creature may just supplant that lord as well. Then she would rule all.

9 comments:

Unknown said...

This is a pretty good section. We needed to get into Hatala's mind and understand a little bit why she puts up with certain things if she is still strong willed. I like the naming as you go, pulling out good references :) This stuff is still very distrubing, no matter how many times it seems to get shoved in our face. Desensitation has not set in yet, which I think is good.

Dan Woessner said...

My hope is to start gearing Hatala away from some of this graphic stuff. It can go a little overboard if not done carefully or excessively. The time for "lovin'" is coming near a close anyhow.

The naming can be a pain sometimes. Other times, I get influenced by the music or other things which has been obvious in a couple of parts. The hard part is remembering everyones name. I actually had Ewam and Eden's father by two different names. I went back and changed that in my Word version. It's easy to forget some of the minor names that pop in and out. I haven't been able to work on the index lately. I need to because that is helpful for everyone.

Unknown said...

Yes I do not envy you in that respect of keeping this large of a story straight. I would prefer to have 4-5 main characters whose names i can remember and everyone else being 1 time appearances :)

Dan Woessner said...

I started reading the rest of the Robert Jordan series that I think I put down on my worst wrote things list recently. (I ran out of books to read and I had two sitting around that I hadn't read so I decided to give it another try).

Anyways, he has probably 8-10 main characters, and then another probably 40 supporting characters. I don't know how it keeps them all straight. That's part of the reason all the books are like 800 to 1,000 pages.

Unknown said...

that series is the first thing i thought of when you said something about not wanting to go one forever

Dan Woessner said...

The story of the series fine, but its too long. The freakin' guy died before he could finish it. Now someone else writing the end. I don't think I could do that.

Dan Woessner said...

I thought of my question. What would title this book and perhaps this series? I am terrible at this sort of thing, but may be entering the first page of this story into a unique little contest I found, and decided that I might want to come up with a working title.

Unknown said...

The Rising was in my head the other night. But it is kinda hard cause I dont know if we have really reached the turning point of this particular section of the story, this book if you will. Like we dont know what the crux is of this one yet unless it is mostly just setting the stage. still got a whole disc to go. Or if looking at a series we need a name of the series as a whole and this book could be The Rising, The Test of Man, Decent of Darkness, Rebirth, The Scourge, Reckoning, or maybe Risings cause it is not only the darkness but the hero of the light as well emerging from hiding really. in the end i got nothing cause i say it is too soon yet to title

Dan Woessner said...

I like most of those names, but like you say, it's a little early to know for sure yet. I just don't want to drive people away with a corny, vague or cliche name if I do enter this contest. I'll send you info on it so you know more about it. I think I have to type a brief description of the book also, that could be hard because I have a hard time pegging exactly what this is all about.